Sunday, November 15, 2009
Up, Simba
While I was reading Up Simba (better late than never) I was, like I said in class, bored. The author exhausted every detail of his following McCain's campaign trail. The only that kept me reading was my own curiosity of WHY the author was hanging on to every detail in his narrative.
So there's this account of what he experienced during his following. How he saw the people around him, how they interacted with each other. The chemistry of the campaign trail in it's purest form. How can anyone argue with him? He's just telling it like it is, right? Dubiatio- make them think you don't have any tricks.
Young people is the target audience, and young people don't care. They will all probably flip through this edition of Rolling Stone looking for pictures of Steven Tyler and Snoop Dogg and articles about Courtney Love's latest overdose. These people aren't going to care about the people that follow John McCain around the primary campaign trail. Maybe that's the point he's trying to make- young people don't care, and that's exactly what their strategy is. Make it uninteresting and appalling to the young population and they will keep with the status quo- don't vote, don't care. Really? Who cares what is in McCain's iPod?
Monday, November 9, 2009
Up, Simba
Sunday, November 8, 2009
McCain's Layers
This extremely long article has so many layers to talk about, just as McCain has so many layers to talk about. However, the two things I keep coming back to as a reader who can look back over the past nine years and feel regrets for my country, is the “what ifs” and the irony of the 2000 election juxtaposed with the 2008 election.
First, I cannot help wonder how the Iraq War would be different, or whether it would exist at all if McCain, a POW, would have been chosen as the Republican nominee over Bush, who avoided the draft. If McCain would have somehow managed to win the presidential election, certainly this man who experienced the worst of Vietnam first-hand would not have made the same mistakes of that war again. I feel like McCain has just been screwed over by Bush so many times: from negative campaign ads to how Bush’s conduct with Iraq has altered the way that many Americans think about Republicans, or even politics in general.
McCain, was the wrong layer of who he is at the wrong time. In 2008 America was calling for, well, a change. Obama quickly gobbled up this concept with his “Change we can believe in” slogan. And then who was the original master of change, John McCain, suppose to be?
I went to a presidential rally for Obama. I skipped school for Obama. I was in aw of the feeling in the crowd. A rock concert response to a president. The ironic thing is that this was how people my age were treating McCain back in 2000, but it wasn’t enough for McCain to get nominated back then.
I feel bad for McCain. He seems to never be able to catch a break. In the 2000 election he was too different from his own party to beat out Bush as his party’s nominee. He bashed the right wing televised church groups that supported Bush, he refused bundled and soft money, he was open with reporters allowing them to ride with him in his campaign bus. BUT, America was not ready for him. Then in 2008, I honestly thought of him as a bitter old man who seem like he would just be more Bush, although he fought hard to portray himself as not being like Bush. This was the first election that I could vote in and honestly, me along with most of the people my age were uninformed about who the McCain of 2000 was. He was called the “Maverick” to try to regain some of his glory in 2000, but to me, a maverick just sounded like a nice way to old and outdated. For the America of 2008, McCain was not different enough.
Perhaps if more people would have been able to read “Up, Simba” before the republican nominee was chosen in 2000 or bothered to read it before the presidential election of 2008, our history may have been completely different. Better or worse, who is to say? I’m only speculating.
Up Simba
After reading Up Simba, I was impressed by Wallace’s use of rhetoric, specifically his presentation of his ethos, and the representation of the political process especially the behind-the-scenes show. Even though Wallace mentions his position as a RS writer and the neutral position of the article, the most impressive focus for me was directed toward the online audience. He mentions “whether it works on your screen or Palm or not, for me the whole thing ended up relevant in ways far beyond any one man or magazine. If you don’t agree, I imagine you’ll have only to press a button or two and make it all go away.” He sets up his position, yes as a neutral writer, however he understands that this audience, the one willing to actually read through despite the distraction of a web browser or streaming, will adhere to the ideas he’s implanted in the article. The forward is an interesting element to the entire article. He already discusses very heavily in “Who Cares” whether “[you] even give a shit whether McCain can or ought to win.” The millennials, as this current generation is called, is one that has developed a dependence on the use of technology to learn whether it be politics, economics, and especially academic. Hence this demographic, this “generation who has cared less about politics and politicians than yours” , is composed of millennials, a group composed of digital technology users and as a rhetorical element to include this new audience was an interesting and strategic technique. Most importantly had I not found this article through this class and stumbled online, this foreword would’ve captured me. The inclusion of all the difficulties of the campaign trip as well as the definition of certain terms helped include the audience in the surreal world where you hit “the rack at 0130 and get up at 0600 and do it all again” merging in a progressive perspective where Wallace includes the audiences, depicts the main subject, reveals the background, and shows the “Negativity” that occurred – hoping we “stay awake” during the entire process.
Up, Simba
Up, Simba
Upon completing “Up, Simba” I was impressed by the ethos that Wallace builds for himself at the beginning of the article. I think they way he presents himself not only caters to the right audience but also is effective in creating a non-biased representation of the John McCain’s campaign. Since this article was written to be included in an issue of “Rolling Stone” the colloquialisms and phrases he uses properly fits into the foundation of the magazine.
For example, numerous times in his article, Wallace uses curse words like “bullshit” and “shit”. While this fits in with the decorum established by “Rolling Stone”, it wouldn’t be acceptable in a formal newspaper. I think this is why this article is so fascinating. In the foreword at the very beginning of the article, Wallace establishes himself, in a very similar way to Sontag’s “Trip to Hanoi”, as “NOT A POLITICAL JOURNALIST” and has “no partisan motives or conservative agenda behind [his] article”.
Both of these elements help to improve how enjoyable the piece is to read. By having Wallace establish that he is not a qualified political journalist and that he can cater to a younger audience just by the language he writes with, brings a fresh perspective to a topic many citizens consider uninteresting. This hooks the reader at the beginning of the article and slowly transitions to talking more about campaigns and politics.
Monday, November 2, 2009
Fortunate Son
et tu brute?
You lie and deceive
A world war can be won
You want me to believe
But I see through your eyes
Bob was comparing the Masters of the Vietnam war to Judah. This was the character in the book of Mark that betrayed Jesus and gave him up to the Romans in exchange for money.
For the others to fire
Then you set back and watch
He highlights the distance that these masters have from the war and the comfort that is granted by this distance.
The most powerful line in this song:
All the money you made
Will never buy back your soul
This relates to what Krzys was saying about the decline of the English department and the rise of power in the Business school. Maybe we are just all out to make money and get power? Does that always have to lead to war though?
Even Jesus would never
Forgive what you do
Bob gets into forgiveness. Bob emphasizes that these sins committed by these masters of war are unforgiveable. Like Judah, they will never be forgiven by Jesus and granted eternal life. Bob will be standing over their grave making sure they make it straight on to hell.
Bob Dylan
Sunday, November 1, 2009
Master of War and Born in the USA
Songs of Vietnam
Fortunate Son and Born in the USA were well known to me as a child but I overlooked the idea that they are about your average man who is pushed into the war. In John Fogerty's Fortunate Son, he speaks of the American government who wanted more and more men to make sacrifices to go into the war. But yet the "senator's son" is able to escape such pressures. The song may seem "simple" because the chorus is repetitive, but it effectively shows how deeply angry Fogerty was about the men who did not enter the war because of their social class. Bruce Springsteen speaks of a similar situation in his song, "Born in the USA." He came from a small town and eventually "they put a rifle in his hands" and sent him to Vietnam. Much like Fogerty, I think he was trying to show the unfairness the average man felt for being forced into a war he didn't understand.
Arlo Gurthrie embellishes his story in his song Alice's Restaurant much like O'Brien did in his stories throughout The Thing They Carried. Alro attempts to show how ridiculous the draft had been. He explains how he couldn't go to war because he littered and the draft found that immoral and cruel. But who said you have to have morals to go fight in a war that is cruel and unjust itself. Ultimately, the artist's of these songs show their disapproval over different aspects of the war and they connected to middle class Americans by portraying themselves as one of them.
Eve of Destruction/Blowin in the Wind
Although McGuire’s song was in protest of the war, Bob Dylan’s song took a different step rhetorically. Rather than try to logically break down the reasons why the world is on a self-destructive path, Dylan uses “Blowin in the Wind” to explain that during this period of time there are many unanswerable questions. Most applicable is when he asks “Yes, 'n' how many deaths will it take till he knows That too many people have died?” His answer is that it is “blowing in the wind”, meaning that there often is no answer, or if there is one, it is often very hard to find.
Monday, October 26, 2009
McNamara: A Complex Man
Like the title states, Errol Morris’ The Fog of War definitely strives to portray exactly that message—that war is indeed a fog and not any clear, definite thing. The documentary conveys this message by allowing one subject (Robert McNamara) to be the main focus from beginning to end. Through this extensive look into the mind of such an integral part of the Vietnam War, the audience is able to begin to understand the complexities of the war as they see that McNamara himself is a complex man.
According to some background research I did on the film, Morris entered his interview with McNamara as a planned twenty-minute session. Morris was wanting to make a film about Vietnam, not about McNamara specifically. It wasn’t until the camera began rolling that Morris realized the exceptional material he had unlocked: a man who seemed to be confessing the guilt he had carried around with him for decades. All the while, of course, still carrying a militaristic charisma that defended his dignity.
The artistic flare that Morris weaves into the documentary makes it seem as if McNamara is talking directly to me, with close-up views of his face and him looking directly into the camera. It seems that McNamara has a liking for getting so close to a subject that it makes you feel as if you know them on a personal level. Not only does he do this throughout the film with McNamara, but he also does this with the awkwardly long shot of Kennedy as well as with others.
This film was made in 2004, which puts it at about 30-35 years past McNamara’s active role in the war. McNamara had three whole decades to ponder over the consequences of his actions and the justifications for his reasoning. At times McNamara admits his own wrong, such as admitting that he was acting as a “war criminal.” At other times, however, he still defends many of his actions, justifying that it seemed like the right thing to do at the time, and therefore no one can be blamed. The most eloquent idea that McNamara presents, however, is at the end. When asked one last question about the war, he replies: "Vietnam is so complex that anything I say will require qualifications.” I think that this is the most important lesson to be taken from this documentary.
Sunday, October 25, 2009
Fog of War
McNamara visits Vietnam far after the war is over and realizes the war was just a huge misunderstanding. After finally getting to know the Vietnamese people and seeing what they were truly fighting for (freedom), McNamara realizes the US was unaware of this at the time and basically saw the Vietnam War as an addition to the Cold War that needed to be taken care of. Although being naive of the Vietnamese people doesn't justify the American intrusion, I still almost felt sorry for McNamara because the film portrays him as a man stuck in a bad situation with no way out.
It made me wonder what I would have done in a similar situation. McNamara was a business man who had very little experience as the Secretary of Defense and he made that very clear to President Kennedy. The film takes away some of his blame by showing how he was pressured into his position. It almost seems as if McNamara wants to blame Johnson for the war since McNamara apparently told him that, "we ought to think of other action rather than military action." This is also an attempt to take the blame of McNamara and see him more as the good guy who had no choice but to follow the president's orders.
Despite who said this or who did that, I don't think it is fair to blame one single person for the Vietnam War. McNamara was obviously blamed for much of the military action that took place during the war, but it's hard for me to put myself in his shoes so I really don't have much room to judge him. Ultimately, this documentary attempts to take some of the war guilt off of McNamara's hands.
The Other Side
The presentation of McNamara’s own account in the documentary humanizes the former Secretary of Defense, by allowing him to tell his side of the story and show true emotion. By introducing this point of view McNamara is not the perpetrator, but he argues that he was a victim of his situation. It would’ve been easy for Morris to make a documentary giving evidence on the incompetence of the government during each of the wars, but instead he chose to let McNamara speak his mind and give the lessons he learned from his experiences. Because of this, I believe that Morris is trying to give a commentary about how war often clouds people’s judgment and that even extremely intelligent and logical people like McNamara can be confused in the “fog of war”. Furthermore Morris explores how even in succeeding wars, many of the same mistakes were made, giving credence to McNamara’s lesson on how "You can't change human nature.”
But the fact remains: after they knew mistakes had been made, they chose not to try and correct them. They instead decided to shield the public from the truth, blatantly lying and continuing on in a losing battle.
McNamara's lack of Ethos
If this was McNamara’s attempt at qualifying or excusing his actions prior to and during the Vietnam War, he achieved just the opposite. He makes two major mistakes in the documentary which in my eyes discredit any ethos he has toward teaching the viewer "lessons".
His first big mistake is denying the blame for his actions, and in fact quickly placing the blame on president Johnson when asked who should be held responsible for the war. This made McNamara look even guiltier. He further tries to pin blame on the “fog of war” as the title suggests, saying that the definition of the “fog of war” is that “war is so complex that it is beyond the ability of the human mind to comprehend all the variables” Yes, I understand that there are multiple layers to war. Yes, there are of course many people and circumstances to blame. But, was McNamara not a consistent force escalating the war? You were Secretary of Defense, McNamara, obviously you are guilty of something; we’re not stupid!
His second big mistake is not answering the questions asked of him. One of the “lessons” he talks about is to “answer the question you wished was asked of you”. Seriously McNamara? What possible good can he think would ever come from telling us that he is not being honest with us, (even in this documentary)? Yes in hindsight, most Americans would say that the war was a terrible idea and most would also try to say they were against it. However, that doesn’t change their actions or words during the war. Toward the end of the documentary there is a flashback to an interview of McNamara during the war where he is asked whether the “war is turning into a stale mate”. He laughs in response and outright lies saying that the US military is showing “substantial progress”. Soon after this he also says in a “lesson” that you cannot change human nature. So basically putting these two "lessons" together, I gather that he was a liar back in the war years and is still a liar now.
I would feel more sympathy for this man if he would just admit his actions and answer all of the questions. Yes, he tears up a few times. Yes he says, “We all make mistakes”. But, he never fully accepts blame; there is always an excuse. If he is not honest with me about his actions during the war nor completely honest in his answers to the questions the interviewer asks, how can I find the "lessons" he is trying to teach in the documentary credible?
Maya Lin: A Strong Clear Vision
Maya Lin says that she, "really did mean for people to cry" and when "you read a name, or touch a name, the pain will come out". Maya knew that her design would strike on debate and erupt negativity, but even so, see had a "strong clear vision" about what would connect better with those who lost friends and family members. When we look at the Marine Corps War Memorial we see a soldiers raising an American flag, without knowing anything about the statue I see a representation of American pride and American resilience. Though the memorial is for the honored soldiers, the statue itself doesn't give you that idea at first glance. Maya's goal wasn't to create a large US flag, but create something in which the people could actually feel and embrace emotionally. I think she saw the American soldiers as not just American Soldiers, but as human beings -- human beings that all had a family waiting for their return home. When we think about war memorials we think of statues, flags, and accolades, Maya Lin went with was she envisioned and created a tombstone to remember the soldiers; a tombstone families and friends could visit and remember there lost ones by.
Fog of War
The title “Fog of War” was the first thing that perked my interest in this movie. Wikipedia defines it as “a term used to describe the level of ambiguity in situational awareness experienced by participants in military operations.” This film involves the fog that not only hinders the soldier’s view but the different fogs that hinder our views of the war as well as all those involved.
The Fog of War
Maya Lin the Silent Author
One of the most interesting topics posed in the documentary is the purpose of the “silent author”. Maya Lin uses this phrase as she speaks at the tenth anniversary of the Vietnam Memorial. She speaks of how that she, as the mind behind the design, must remain silent and let her work speak for itself. She is merely a conduit through which the emotions of the veterans could flow. This particularly resonates with the Civil Rights Memorial that she designed years after her success with the Vietnam Memorial. By incorporating a quote by Martin Luther King Jr. she decides to highlight the work of a notable Civil Rights activist instead of drawing attention to her design. Although the work is hers, the true author or inspiration behind the work is the Civil Rights Movement itself.
The documentarian also highlights this “silent author” aura with the incorporation of a reoccurring scene in which Maya Lin works on an unnamed project. Years after Lin completed her Vietnam and Civil Rights Memorials, she continues on with other projects. By coming back to the same scene with a hardworking present day Lin, the director emphasizes that out of necessity all of her pieces have the implied author of the people to which they are dedicated. While she may or may not be personally attached to the things she commemorates, her artisanship is rightfully not the center of attention but rather the ideas and emotions evoked while examining her works.
Maya Lin
Fog of War
And yet, somehow his recommendations to the President were to keep information from the American public. Wouldn't you think that being completely honest would be the best move, if your intentions really were best? Hiding details from the public didn't help his cause at all.
He said that he would only "answer the question [he] wished had been asked of [him]." So maybe the real questions had even been asked, but he answered them in a way as not to give his mistakes away. One of his lessons was to "be prepared to reexamine your reasoning," which was illustrated with bargraphs of men killed in action, wounded, tons of bombs dropped, images of dead bodies and burning villages, and rolls of images of soldiers in action.
He said that the war was the President's responsibility and never took credit for any of the wrongdoings of the war. He said that if Kennedy lived through it, the escalation would not have reached what it had. If he was really so opposed to the war, why didn't he speak out? He was in the perfect position to make a large impact of the direction that the war was taking and said nothing.
Even after his "resignation," McNamara chose not to say anything then either. Was he just being a coward? Or was there true evilness radiating from those actions (or lack of action)? Either way, he set an impressive precedent for administrations in the future. (sarcasm)
Fog of War
He makes a good point by showing all of his fancy statistics and comparisons, which seems to be all McNamara really has. The images of destruction and percentages of cities destroyed compared to our major cities is extremely effective to his logical argument. He is able to logically show how the destruction we caused on the Japanese cities was ridiculous statistically. Not only did the numbers make it seem unnecessary, but the thought of another country destroying 50+ of our major cities with fire bombs.
What he did lack was a conclusion about how we could have fought the japanese logically without bombing them. Yes he makes sense by saying we could have lost 20,000 or more troops on the beaches of Japan, but he never comes forward with his own conclusion, that he could have made when he was in office and it would have mattered.
Tuesday, October 20, 2009
Monday, October 19, 2009
The Things They Carried
Sunday, October 18, 2009
The Things They Carried
O'Brien also tells Rat's story about Mary Anne who discovered her passion for battle. When Rat seems to be adding in his own commentary, Sanders tell him to "get the hell out of the way and let it tell itself" (106). Since all that matters is the "raw material", the truth behind the story becomes foggy when you add in your opinion. It prevents the audience from forming their own ideas about the story, whether it has a moral or not.
Sanders also states that in order to tell a story right you "need a consistent sound, like slow or fast, funny or sad" (107). By exaggerating a war story to provoke different emotions like laughter or tears, the point of the story is misunderstood. Basically, Mary Anne lost her innocence after becoming acquainted with the Greenies. Adding in your own personal opinion only distracts the listeners from the point of the story.
Ultimately, O'Brien attempts to make his audience realize that true war stories will not effect how we go about our daily lives. He begins to explain that in the end, really, there's nothing much to say about a true war story, except maybe "Oh" (77). There is no deeper meaning to the never ending war stories. The raw facts are the only truth because everything else is just someones interpretation of what they remember happening.
Story Telling
The Things They Carried and Notes
Their hearts are heavy. They must weigh the most. Their thoughts are heavy too. I believe towards the end First Lieutenant Jimmy Cross realizes with all the real weight from his gear he cannot afford to carry anything of an emotional nature like letters from Martha. He had to become a soldier more like a machine doing a task rather than a man who could get tied up in emotions, which in war could ultimately kill you. This is why he burnt the letters and the pictures to become more regimented.
I think Norman Bowker, from the Notes short story, never fully separated life back in the States with life in Vietnam during the war. When he couldn't get past the fabricated daydreams of life after the war created during it, he ended up killing himself. He "described the problem of finding a meaningful use for his life after the war" to O'Brien.
O'Brien probably inhanced the things they carried story to help us understand Notes better. O'Brien mentions this tactic in Notes.
The Things They Carried
While reading Things They Carried, I could not help but to realize how Tim O’Brien’s war experiences turned into such a phenomenal literary piece. O’Brien states “Often in a true war story there is not even a point, or else the point doesn’t hit you until twenty years later…” meaning that the point of the personal accounts came to him much later in his life. The point may be viewed upon differently in many minds, but, personally, I believe that point of the stories was to represent the experiences that the soldiers carried.
The composition of his war experiences seemed to be written down for the purpose of a diary. He presents many short stories that each serves a specific purpose in telling a certain story in its entirety, whether it was about telling a true war story, or even killing a Vietnamese soldier. By providing, me, the reader with these stories I am able to get a view into the experiences that O’Brien and his platoon encountered during the memorable Vietnam War.
Personally, the title The Things They Carried means literally, the things they carried. By this, I mean the stories and experiences that the Americans took from this war are the things they carry. In the case of the American troops, it was the sight of the death of their friends, such as the death of Curt Lemon, or the heartache from a girl thousands of miles away. These were things they carried during the war, as well as after for eternity.
The Things They Carried
All of the soldiers in Tim O’Brian’s book were carrying a sense of cowardice inside them. Their cowardice nature was a symbol of their fear for not having a promised tomorrow. None of the soldiers were brave enough to admit their fear of the war, therefore they all joined a troop. Some might not think of them as containing cowardice but they did because they all went to war out of fear of people knowing that they were in fact, afraid. Their presence in the war was out of pure cowardice, not bravery. Tim O’Brian himself attempted to flee the war but as he approached freedom, out of fear of others thinking he was a coward, he cowardly came back and joined the war.
Mind Games
The aspect of the book that I found the most interesting was how Tim O’Brian seems to tell his reader one thing and then suddenly change his mind. This turns the book into more of a rhetorical teaching device than a war book.
For example he spends the whole chapter “The Man I Killed” repeating details about the man he killed merely to later tell us that he never killed him, it was a lie. His rhetoric, specifically in the repetition of details is so descriptive that I could feel his guilt. I felt so sorry for O’Brian. Then, when he says that the story was a lie, I felt betrayed. I had been tricked into feeling sorry for him. I didn’t want to believe the O’Brian who was telling me the story was false. This just proved to me how persuasive the rhetoric of pathos is. I had been convinced via O’Brian’s emotions to believe that he had killed this man and could not outlive the guilt of it. He had been so convincing that when he logically mentioned later that the story was false, I had a hard time changing my mind.
Another example of how he uses his mind games for rhetorical purposes is in how he teaches his reader how to tell a true war story in one chapter and then later says that there is no such thing as a true war story. This was more of a proof of the power of ethos. The true fact that he had fought in Vietnam had me convinced that his stories about Vietnam would be true.
I think that with the two examples listed above, O’Brian wants to show that stories, like war, are all about perspective. Each person tells a story differently from the next person just as each person experiences a war differently than the person fighting next to them. He also wants to show that the stories about war or death are more about the people in the story than the story itself. The purpose of the story is not to have a moral or an extraordinary tale or even anything truthful about it. The purpose of the story is to remember the people in it and to allow them to live on forever.
The Things They Carried
The things they carried
When narrating the story of Jensen and Strunk, I felt the significance was the mentality behind each of the men. The necessity to steal and be wronged by the theft, though through the chapter “The things they carried” the knife held meaning as every article and item held meaning to the men, led to the results of the chapter. Despite Jensen’s fear and Strunk’s pacifistic stance regarding the beating, the two men end up being friends and with Strunk’s death on the flight, Jensen’s duty is relieved – his relief ironic of the title “Friends.” Despite being enemies they understood a code of conduct, just or not, and despite being friends, they showed little sympathy at the state of the other.
“I survived but it was not a happy ending. I was a coward. I went to the war.” O’Brien’s desire to avoid the war and yet be compelled to fight shows a chain of causality. He runs to Canada, befriends an elderly man, and yet in the end, the weight of his consciousness only comes crashing down. Even after the war, he discusses his relative ease in adjusting to graduate school. The significance of this story deals with our consciousness – what it forced him to join, what it forced him to fight, and how it forced him to move on. The story lacked a moral ending and yet even now I cannot vouch entirely for the validity of this war story after all his adamant disposition against the war and being twenty yards to freedom, yet conforming to the standards of his hometown, seems a so unbelievable human that it could be well made to describe that sense of wartime virtue that so many story give off.
The Things They Carried: First Impressions
On the cover of my version of the novel, there’s a quote from the New York Times: “A marvel of storytelling…[The Things They Carried] matters not only to the reader interested in Vietnam but to anyone interested in the craft of writing as well.” Sounds like the perfect selection for this class then, huh? Perhaps that’s why Krysz was jumping up and down with excitement when talking about it. Indeed, Tim O’Brien masters a writing style that is simple enough for someone off the street to read yet engaging enough to attract fellow writers. And all the while we’re getting a first-hand glimpse of life as a U.S. soldier in Vietnam. Like Sarah mentioned in her post, the novel does seem to have a quality of being like a “therapy session.” In my words, I would call this the diary-like aspect of the story: O’Brien seems to be talking to his readers as if they were his friends, as if a diarist would write in his diary. At the same time however, as the quote states, a lot of the novel is storytelling. Therefore, we find a balance between the feelings that would be found in a diary and the plot that is found in a novel. And while Borders and Barnes and Nobles refer to this book as fiction, we also must take into account that this is a work of fiction from a writer who was actually over in Vietnam, who is actually a middle-aged man now living in America. Thus, I find O’Brien’s credibility as a writer higher than many others because he was a witness to the war.
Story-truth
He uses these stories not only to connect with us-or really make us connect with him and his experiences, but to comfort himself. He kept his memories, the people he cared about, his experiences, alive through his stories. As long as he could tell stories, he could hold on to these people forever, because with each story they came alive once again.
Repetition
While reading The Things They Carried, I was often distracted by the number of times O’Brien repeated ideas. However, I do think that his use of repetition within his novel succeeded in conveying a multitude of different ideas. By repeating ideas such as what the men carried with them and how men died, the repetition conveys that the things they carried were more than just material, they were also emotional and burdening.
For example, on page seventy, O’Brien first recounts how Curt Lemon died. Then, not too much further in the story, O’Brien recounts it again on page eighty-three. Since O’Brien knows that the audience hasn’t forgotten what happened to Curt Lemon, he uses this repletion to convey the impact his death had on the minds of the men. The high frequency of this story and others like it within the novel suggests that even though death was common to the soldiers in Vietnam, the aftermath of death is still as upsetting. This repetition can also be seen with the death of Ted Lavender.
Another message O’Brien conveys through his use of repetition is the soldiers’ need for something to ground them. For instance, on page two, O’Brien writes, “They [letters] were signed Love, Martha, but Lieutenant Cross understood that Love was only a way of signing and did not mean what he sometimes pretended it meant.” Then, on page twenty-four he writes, “She signed the letters Love, but it wasn’t love, and all the fine lines and technicalities did not matter.” In this use of repetition, O’Brien conveys that these types of thoughts are on the minds of the soldiers often and give them something to think about while surrounded by war.
Therapy through writing
When I go to a therapy session, sometimes there are elaborations, stories that kind of happened, etc.. The point of therapy isn’t to lay down your life story verbatim, but to feel better. I think that this is what this author was doing. He took a life altering 2-3 years of his life in Vietnam and wrote out his pains. He told stories to get over the trauma. Whether or not they were true is beside the point, it helped him get past the horrors that he went through. Seeing your best friend die, walking around in a sewage pond, and getting shot at- all of these things happened one way or another.
His friend who hung himself didn’t have any way to release those feelings. He didn’t have an out for his emotions and so he just snapped one day. I think that by writing these short stories, O’Brian was saving his own sanity. Different people cope in different ways, but writing I believe is a wonderful way to get everything out in the open. Writing helps me organize my thoughts, remember sequences of events, and better understand myself.
Friday, October 9, 2009
Deception at its Best
This technique of placing the representatives of the U.S. right next to the completely opposite situation of the Vietnamese, begins with the first 5 minutes of the film. Davis takes us directly to a village where people are living in poverty and constantly working for a living. We see them as just plain village people, not savages or crazed peasants. Just people in a third world country, trying to live a decent life like you and me. They don't seem to be in any kind of danger, or in need of any immediate assistance, however, as we see them working in the fields, an American soldier walks in the field of view, almost out of nowhere, carrying a weapon. Why do we even need soldiers in a peaceful area? Are we afraid of the woman with the basket in the field? Do we have some sort of obligation to protect those in this village? Or are we simply just taking advantage of the local villagers for food and shelter because we feel they need us and should help us? Davis did a good job of showing how differently we appear in a country we really should never have been in in the first place.
Later in the film, Davis shows the destroyed parts of a village, interviewing various villagers who have lost everything, including people they loved. After interviewing a local man who used to have a kitchen and house, Davis shows us an interview with a former soldier who was doing the bombing runs. He claimed with a cold conscience that he was just doing his job, and that nothing was more satisfying than seeing something explode. It was a professional business trip that concluded in a successful solution. He went on later to say that it was easier for him to do because he could not see the blood and people dying when he dropped the bombs. How does this make it any better? Yes, he was doing his job, but saying that it was OK to do just because he didn't see the immediate effects on the people doesn't make what he was doing right. A parallel can be drawn between the ideal American fortune 500 business meeting around the time of the recent lay offs. Many professionals met in certain areas of the country, discussed what was best for the company in terms of financial stability and saving the face of the company. They executed their orders from the CEO and other high executives without considering how it would effect any lower people in the company. Their way of laying off people with families was a soldier's way of dropping a few well placed bombs here or there, as long as it saves the face of the nation. This makes us all wonder, "Was this war just a professional business decision?"
Thursday, October 8, 2009
We Can Change the World Forcefully
There was a since of duty in Americans then to better the world, to rid it of evil forces like the Nazis. American citizens thought their government couldn't be wrong after WWII and the American government took advantage of this to pursue personal agendas. They went into Vietnam to prevent the spread of Communism in a newly free country. They did it forcefully. And they were wrong.
American soldiers and American citizens began to see it. Journalists like Susan Sontag wrote about how wrong our government was for attacking the Vietnamese. Davis filmed it. After all, the Vietnamese were fighting the French for independence just how the Americans did against the British two centuries before. This is why America was wrong.
Ho Chi Minh talked of admiration towards the United States and their independence and protection of individual liberties. Why could the Vietnamese not have the same? Their own form of it should be allowed. Why did America have to intervene? They were hypocrites. It was a contradiction of their own values.
hearts and minds
The film begins with a depiction of the Vietnamese country side. People working and making a living and it depicts a peaceful country side where people are trying to survive through daily means. It quickly follows the escalation of the war stating that American could “possibly control the future of the world” mixed with a song of soldiers. The number of presidents in support of the war speaking ultimately of the “hearts and minds” of the people there add to the patriotic understanding that first captured the hearts and minds of the American mainland. It builds a false sense of patriotism as it quickly switches to the feelings of desperation and leads to the flip side of this war.
To me some of the most powerful scenes were the interviews with the different soldiers – their commentaries and reactions. Many speak of the pleasures of war. One soldier at 35:56 speaks of the enjoyment of the kill, speaking of not wanting it for the “politics or whatever but because they were the opposition.” He grants much of what Sontag states in “Trip to Hanoi” that these people, the Vietnamese, were less than people in the American’s eyes. I empathized with the original scene where the people working to survive and the pleasure that seemed to glisten from the solider as he ended their hopes. This sense of compassion ties strongly to the positive reactions of this film: the flip side of the war marred by the depression of the bombings and killings.
The contrasting points of view tie heavily to the contrasting results of the war. The presidents assured the general public of the swift advancements of the war and their cynicism of the Tet Offensive and the actual failure of progress ties many of the contradictions portrayed in the film. The torturing of a native without the capacity to understand, threatened by helicopter dropping, and the officer’s response in the denying of such allegation only prove to strengthen the disparity between reality and what was fed to the public. This disparity adds strength to the emotional connection as the deceived revel on the manipulations they were barred against.
It’s not terrible difficult to see the responses against this film. While certain soldiers and certain officers were interviewed in their disgruntled nature, not all could see the negativity of the war like Coker. He tells the children at a school how the war was won despite the opposite being true – another layer of deception to the next generation. It stirs outrage at the fact, not only was the public tricked but that despite these acknowledgements Coker still attempts to undermine the kids. But at the same time, the existence of these accounts brought into light serve to portray the connections that people so far away could be the same as the rest of us – that the opposition could be the same as any other person.
Hearts and Minds
One technique that Davis uses throughout the documentary is the juxtaposition of interviews and events in the US with the same things in Vietnam. A solid contrast is drawn between the Vietnamese people and the American soldiers. On one side a Vietnamese man speaks of the sorrows of the loss of life in Vietnam as he hammers away constructing children’s coffins. On the other side a former soldier in uniform calmly explains how his bombing missions were “professional” and was necessary job.
When placed next to each other in this manner, its hard not to sympathize with the Vietnamese people. The inclusion of clips of violence and death, raise the questions “why are we doing this” in our minds and blurs the demarcation between “good” and “bad” in the Vietnam War. Were we right to be there? Did the inconclusive end really justify the horrible means? Do we really have an authority over the way a people should live their lives? These are all questions that Davis encourages us to ponder over, using not only our minds, but our hearts.
What Did we Learn?
In the documentary "Hearts and Minds", Davis uses the brutal images he’s captured first-hand in conjunction with interviews from both sides to convey the thought that the American’s were ignorant and merciless in regard to the situation in Vietnam. He builds credibility as an anti-war proponent by interviewing soldiers who have come back willing to tell their agonizing stories. It is incredible the level of self- indignation these soldiers felt towards the acts they committed. It is also incredible the level of ignorance that high-ranking officials in the American government display through their comments on the war.
Throughout the movie, the audience was introduced to many different people. We saw deserters, POW’s, Senators, Generals, and the soldiers themselves. Each one had a different perspective on the war. For example, the soldiers that we met that have come back from the war agreed that America shouldn’t have been there. One ex-soldier stated, “We weren't on the wrong side. We were the wrong side.” This simple parallelism perfectly summarizes what many soldiers agreed upon. They felt that they were more the enemy than the enemies they were fighting. At the end of the movie, one of the soldiers was asked what they thought America learned from being in Vietnam. He simply replied that everyone involved in the war was afraid to admit that they did in fact learn something. Whether it was out of shame for what they did or out of some level of self-preservation, many Americans were afraid to admit what they had done.
One specific idea that Davis wanted to convey was excellently executed near the end of the movie. Davis was trying to prove that the view that Americans had towards the Vietnamese was completely skewed as a result of labeling them their enemy for so long. In the scene that I am referring to, Davis documents the grief that the Vietnamese go through when dealing with the deaths of loved ones. We hear the piercing cries of children and witness one mother trying to climb into the grave of what the audience is led to presume to be her son. All of these images provoke sympathy with the audience, and when General Westmoreland comes on the screen immediately after stating “The Oriental doesn't put the same high price on life as does the Westerner. Life is cheap in the Orient”, we are angered by the idea that someone could be that incredibly ignorant.
The naivety portrayed in the American people in the documentary leads the audience to question whether or not what was happening in Vietnam was worth it. Additionally they were led to question the level of inhumanity that people could drop down to. Overall, Davis is successful in conveying his extreme disapproval of the war. Sense this was compiled in hindsight of the war, Davis uses this documentary as a warning for the future, one that he hopes will sink into every heart of every American.
Hearts and Minds
Davis succeeds in making Americans feel ashamed of their role in the war. A soldier tells about an incident where a Vietnamese soldier is thrown out of the airplane because of a communication barrier. The next clip is a stern looking sergeant claiming how he doesn’t believe such things occurred. It creates anger as it appears that the sergeant simply "brushes off" the topic. Throughout the documentary high school football scenes of coaches hyping their teams to crush the enemy and win are shown, paralleling the American attitude of letting nothing get in their ways of winning the war. One soldier in an interview explains how he wasn’t even sure what he was fighting for; he just wanted to kill because they were the enemy. Another scene describes a sergeant’s pride at watching his men’s faces during a funeral, a solemn moment, that is interrupted when he adds the fact that they still looked like “a bloody bunch of good killers,” completely ruining the sincerity and innocence of the moment.
Throughout Davis shows us what effect the war had on the innocent- the ruins of Vietnamese villages, crying children. He shows multiple interviews with Vietnamese people all claiming the same thing, about the amount, from their homes to family, they have lost. There is also a part in the documentary where multiple Americans are interviewed and asked if the war has affected them; all respond that it hasn’t. One man even has the nerve to admit that he doesn’t know which side of Vietnam America is fighting.
Towards the middle though, Davis does show a scene where prosthetic legs are being made for American soldiers and even interviews a soldier who has been paralyzed. These parts of the documentary show us that even though the Americans are seen as the bad guys, and the Vietnamese as innocent, it shows that even American soldiers suffered too. Showing how both side suffered ties into Davis's main argument that the Vietnam War was drawn-out much longer than it needed to be, and also that many people lost their lives for nothing.